Life is like water
Life is like water
Whether it's the ocean or a river
It’s cold dark and blue
It can sometimes be a storm
But it helps us transform
We can never control how we ever feel, and sometimes
That's good. Showing how we truly
Feel, makes us be the best version of us
All the chaos we go through when there's a storm,
With time tidal waves settle
You are adjusting to the things you
Love and hate
Water can be slow and warm, as the sun hits
And it reminds you when you were kids
Making promises to protect one and other
As you grow, your waves get bigger, you realize you are
Important
You admire yourself, you are different.
Some may be scared of you
As you grow, you help others. As you rise, you form
Different shapes
All your waves are mismatched.
As you try to go higher to reach the ones you love
To help, you fall
Water gives hope
All the plants, human, animal grow, and you help.
Like water there are things you can't control
You just have to go with the flow
Life is like water, hectic, free, hard, lose, but you just
Need to find your flow
With the Waves
Photograph "blue water texture" by ErrorTribune is licensed under CC BY-SA 2.0.
Comments
Devyn Pomenti
September 10, 2023That is a brilliantly stated analysis of life that compares it to water. It serves as a moving reminder that, like water, life can be both choppy and transformative. The comparison of waves to human development and our influence on others is very moving. It supports accepting life’s ambiguity and discovering one’s own rhythm, much like water does when it finds its flow. I appreciate you sharing this interesting article. It’s truly beautiful how are beautiful nature connects to us humans in a beautiful way. Mother nature always tries to re create and show us the way and oath to a peaceful life.
Filippos
December 30, 2023This poem beautifully captures the essence of life by drawing a parallel to water. The metaphor of life as water, with its various forms and states, is both poignant and insightful.
The mention of storms symbolizes difficult times that we all face, but it’s highlighted that these storms contribute to personal transformation.
The idea that we cannot control our feelings but expressing them helps us become the best version of ourselves is a powerful message. It emphasizes the importance of authenticity and self-awareness in personal growth.
A really interesting poem, and very meaningfull.
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